Guest wrote: I love the image of the sniper morphing into Nikita Khruschev and pounding his shoe... funny, and prophetic too.
I was totally LMAO when I wrote that.
As long as we're devising alternatives, why not simply omit the sentence? Don't have the sniper throw down the revolver at all.
Not throwing down the gun would deprive the author of an optimal device for depicting the emotional state of the character’s transition from intently focused sniper to the pinnacle of maniacal rage when throwing the revolver, back to cogent reality after its discharge and near-miss of his head. His laughter, after the near-miss, reinforces the point. The gun is the optimal literary device for this, despite the glaring error in the verisimilitude.
Of course, that deprives us of the opportunity to second guess the author for his error about the firearm discharging.
It’s certainly possible the author was aware of this but chose to ignore it for the sake of the story.
However, there are other obvious errors in verisimilitude that I didn’t mention. However, they might only be obvious to those familiar with military history and weaponry, ballistics, and basic human physiology.
There was a small hole where the bullet had entered. On the other side there was no hole. The bullet had lodged in the bone. It must have fractured it.
It is very improbable for the bullet to have lodged in the forearm bone (or any bone) of the militia man. It’s logical to assume the rifles used by both snipers were either the Pattern 1914, standard issue for British military troops, or the Ross Mk III (preferred by snipers). Both these weapons fired caliper .303 copper-nickel jacketed lead- ball ammunition. When fired, the bullet has 3500 Joules of kinetic energy exiting the muzzle. At fifty yards, there is still enough energy to travel through the forearm bones of atleast six large-boned men. Snipers were known to cut or score the bullet tips to promote its expansion on impact, increasing the likelihood of a kill or serious wounding. If the bullet expanded on impact, it still wouldn’t stop in the bone, it would continue on, taking a large portion of the arm with it –disgusting, but an accurate approximation.
Other inconsistencies with the revolver:
“He was almost deafened with the report and his arm shook with the recoil.”
This suggests a large caliper sidearm. There are a few choices for this weapon:
The .45 caliper M1917 Revolver
The .455 caliper Webley Revolver Mk VI
Both of these revolvers have a barrel length of more than half overall length of ~11 inches.
“He picked up his revolver and put it in his pocket. Then he crawled down through the skylight to the house underneath.”
These revolvers would not conveniently fit in a pocket. It would fall out after three steps. This suggests a smaller sidearm. In any case, a trained military combatant would never do this. If his holster wasn’t available, he’d stick it in his waistband, being intuitively careful not to turn himself into a eunuch.
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He was now standing before a row of chimney pots, looking across, with his head clearly silhouetted against the western sky.
A trained military combatant –especially a sniper –would never expose his position in this manner. This is just plain stupid...
It’s easy to see the author was unfamiliar with military tactics and weapons. He was however very familiar with pens, typewriters, and biblically based moral precepts because of his education and training for the priesthood. A notable irony, here: the author was probably already an atheist when he wrote this story, having abandoned his divinity studies and then his faith, a few years earlier.
GA